Not at all what I was hoping for. I knew this would be a short erotica story, however, the grammar and spelling was what got me. I did like the story line which is why I gave it 3 stars. The bad grammar and spelling completely made me lose track in the book because I was trying to figure out what the author was trying to say. I am still going to try and read some of the other short stories the author has done, I'm hoping it was just this one that I had to give a lesser rating.
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